Zindagi ka Yeh Mod
Zindagi is mod pe aakar
kuch thahar si gaayi hai.
Alag alag raaste bhi hai,
aur unki apni apni manzilein bhi.
Sab saamne hai, sab khule hai,
bas chah nahin to chah nahin chun nein ki.
Jaane kyon is mod pe aakar
zindagi kuch thahar si gayi hai.
Na baandhe hai mujhe koi bediyan,
na ghere hai mujhe koi samasyaon ka jaal.
Phir bhi jaane kyon is mod pe
zindagi kuch jakad se gayi hai.
Tum bhi ho aur main bhi hoon
aur shayad se woh pyaar bhi.
Lekin kuch hai jo nahin hai,
ya shaayad se kuch tha hi nahin.
Jaane kyon yeh maansikta
mere mann mein simat si gayi hai.
Zindagi is mod pe aakar,
kuch tahar si gaayi hai.
posted by Silent Melody | 6:42 AM
13 Comments:
wonderful poem. and all along I was thinking something funny to tag along these lines. (unscrupulous!!!)
keep writing.
Hey Fizz, LOL "zakar" is sooo bad!! Changed it; Thanks for being a Nazi (Are u now a Nazi Witch? eh??) hahha and I am really glad you liked it.
Hey Bleu, thanks. And "Bleu Baccha" not everything is funny!! haha just kidding!!
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Silo
That was beaoooootiful!!!!!
am a little obsessed with this song...it seems to be apt for this mood..
"Dil ki girah khol do..."
from "raat aur din"
does it describe the mood?
If yes, then I did "get the poem"
maybe you misunderstodd what I said. I did write something, but then decided not to spoil the comment space. ;p now decide for yourself :)
Oh this was so nice....:-))) lovely!!
kahaniyan aur bhi hongi
seene par mauj, aur bhi
aahat karegi
bahas kar, ahista
thak kar poochegi
mukaam se pehle ruk kar
saanson ka anjaam
pathar par likhkar
Zindagi kis mod par ruk gayi hai
kyun thaher si gayi hai
very evocative ...anybody can choose to resonate with it :) very nice indeed :)
Hey Jeevs thanks a ton!! I am sorry, so I reallt do not know if u understood or not.
Chay, thanks for dropping by and glad you liked it.
Bleu, sorry! :-)But I still did not understand you.
LOL IW;
Doh that was a great writing; wherez it from or you wrote that? And Thanks;
eeks; Jiva I wanted to write that I do not know that song!
Silo ! that was me ..and was not quoting anybody ..though i am sure far more profound things have been said in far more eloquent terms ! :)
cheers then
hey silo!
that was beautiful...and cud relate to it so well..a kind of still pause...
ahh...but dont try to divert my attention from u'r part 3..i'll pester u till u post it...
ardra
Silo,
Nice one. Can relate - at some point we do feel this. Perhaps the mind and/or the body need time to replenish energy reserves, which is what triggers such things....
Priya.
Very nice poem .. I loved it, especially the first line .. which forced me to write something more on that .. I have no clue, if its a bad practice to write something from someone's line. Still I feel i should share -
Zindagi is mod pe aakar, kuch tahar si gaayi hai.
gujarte huey in sehmey se palo mein ulajh si rahi hai..
kal shaam ko poochaa tha jindagi ne mujh se..
kabhi kahin to rukogey aur karogey hisaab mujhse..
kya wo hi hisaab karne ki umeend mein,
mujh ko khud se rusva karne ki chah mein
thaam ke samay ka aanchal, tahar se gayi hai, jindgai...
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